tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-77038183985944729.post64548689838123190..comments2018-09-13T17:12:14.032+12:00Comments on Stanley: THE JOURNEY!?SPX Blog Admin 2http://www.blogger.com/profile/16528806958580752607noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-77038183985944729.post-80538633468134777992018-03-26T10:23:14.072+13:002018-03-26T10:23:14.072+13:00Hi Stanley. Thank you for sharing your thoughts o...Hi Stanley. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on Nate and Oscar's trip. I think you need to add more explanation as to where they travelled to so I can really understand all the places their ancestors went to. Maybe you could think about answering these questions:<br /><br />* What interesting discoveries did they find in Rarotonga?<br />* What was cool to learn about these islands?<br /><br />Maybe you could add a short story about learning about ancestors in Tonga so we can hear their another example of a journey.<br /> <br />I look forward to seeing your additions to your writing above.ApeluatT.Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11776128971717057812noreply@blogger.com